For this story, the last comments I got from an editor really made a difference. Others had told me they had trouble with the motivation -- the last editor was the only one who specified that that was on a personal level because the characters read like series characters, where parts of their history was explored elsewhere. Once I knew what was missing, fixing it was much easier.
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Date: 2010-12-20 03:39 am (UTC)For this story, the last comments I got from an editor really made a difference. Others had told me they had trouble with the motivation -- the last editor was the only one who specified that that was on a personal level because the characters read like series characters, where parts of their history was explored elsewhere. Once I knew what was missing, fixing it was much easier.
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