The Plot Bunny Farm

I'm editing Blood Brother right now, but that's going to take a couple weeks to get through. It's deep, it's detailed, it's over 14k, and my critters keep mentioning the word "novel." Meanwhile, I'm trying to polish up some of the shorter pieces I wrote in May for Story-a-Day on Forward Motion.

I think I have Bein' Green ready for feedback. Anyone interested in critting it if I put it up here friends-locked? (2,568 words)