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Thanks to everyone who weighed in on Sabra and SF. Current word count on the file is just barely over 90k, so for length I don't really need to make major additions. Some scenes are being deleted, some added. Overall, it's going to stay about the same length. I'm going to finish the current edit pass, maybe making notes on things (such as setting reactions) that could use additional work. Then do a complete read-through and see if I think it's ready to go out to critters or if it needs more in-depth labor.

As to when . . . well, I'd hoped to have it done before now. A year ago, I finished writing the draft. I should've managed a single edit pass in that time! But it's been so long since I did anything on it that I have to work to get over that inertial barrier again.

So very much I want to be working on right now. I want Sabra's edit finished (which isn't the same as wanting to work on it, I realize). I want to run through Witchy Woman and re-outline and rewrite it. It's only 53k now, and that's much too short. And scenes need to be rearranged, in addition to the subplots being beefed up. Then there's this middle-grade SF novel I've started. Only a few thousand words into it, and I think it has a lot of promise. I need to get back into the discipline of "The Writing Comes First," so I can make real progress. Then I have this new urban fantasy (or possibly paranormal romance?) idea with a male MC.

But right now, all of that's taking a back seat to short story work. Yeah, I know, I said I was giving up on those for 2008. But I think "Ophid Dei" would be good to submit to Eclipse Two. (Just realized today that my story is a sort of response to Butler's "Bloodchild." Fascinating. I'm taking part in the dialogue of the genre.) So that has to be edited and out in the next week--by the 29th, in fact. And I want to submit "Winter White" to Cat's Curious Press, which has a deadline of March 31, but I need to wrap up the story *and* edit it in that time. Then I need to get my edits done on my submission for PARSEC's short story contest and get that sent off by April 15. I've had that written forever, so I've no excuse to not get it done.

All of this, plus keeping up with an adorable two-month old. Well, no, she's not running around yet, but she needs a lot of cuddling and feeding and changing. And it's awfully hard to do those things and type at the same time. I'm going to manage, though.

Some other time, I'll mention the *other* things I want to write, intermediate-length works for various contests. Right now, though, I've got to deal with dinner.
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Nathan Bransford's Surprisingly Essential First Page contest last week had me looking at Sabra's first page, debating whether to enter. I decided against it for a single, simple reason: The book's supposed to be SF, but there's nothing in the opening that indicates that. The first page should reflect the book so the reader knows what they're getting; I realized my opening needs work.

Then I was thinking more about it this weekend and came to the depressing conclusion that, as currently written, Sabra isn't SF. It may have an SF setting (future time frame, human colony long-standing enough to have cities, genetically identical replacement organs available with enough credits to pay for them), but it's really not necessary for the story. When it comes down to it, it's a story about an athlete recruited to act as a bodyguard for a pharmacy company exec who's in the middle of a battle for rights for his company's most lucrative product. Nothing SFnal at all. As has been said about other things, there's no there there.

Now I'm debating what to do. Should I keep working on the editing pass I'm doing to make certain that I've fixed the bare bones and character arcs? Should I start over at the beginning and remove all the SF trappings? Should I figure out how to really make it SF and *then* do the edit over from the beginning? If I figure it out, I'll let you know. Or when, I suppose. I did make editing Sabra my number one priority this year.*

*Yes, I know I did not post my 2008 goals here yet. Or a 2007 wrap-up.
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It's been a busy week. I've been working on putting together a marketing blitz for my business, and it's just been a little here, a little there, print 100 copies of this, and so forth. Then the printer ran out of ink, et cetera, et cetera, et cetera. I updated my business Website, too. I was a bit ashamed to realize I'd done nothing on the homepage in almost two years. The marketing letters go out in tomorrow's mail, and if anyone looks at the site, at least it's fresh.




Still working on my crit for Teri. I'd hoped to have it back to her next week. Still might, but it's going to take a lot of pushing. Without the marketing on my plate, though, that's more feasible.




In other news, I've completed my first draft of my NaNo, finally. I'll be pushing it to draft 1.5 next week as I go through and check to see whether there are any missing scenes that I can fill in now. Then Sabra goes on vacation for a couple of months, and I go back to Shadowed Sight.

NaNo news

Nov. 16th, 2006 02:46 pm
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Late last night, I hit 50k--fastest I have ever written in my life! I'm still writing; my goal is to finish my 100k draft by the end of the month.

Oh, and a former resident of Lehigh Valley, currently in Western Massachusetts, has challenged our region to a word war. They're still ahead, but we're gaining!

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It's here--November 1, beginning of that crazy month.

I'm off to a decent start--more than 1,000 words already, with lots of time left in the day for more.

I wanted to point out theNaNo Widgets for tracking performance.

Here's one of my favorites, the live participant icon:

If anyone wants to use me for comparison in a word war, my user ID is 31617. Lehigh Valley's regional ID is 254.



Good luck to all the other crazies out there!
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Sign-ups for this year went live at the beginning of the week. If you haven't logged in yet, go!

And if you're in Lehigh Valley, swing by our welcome thread and say hello. (Yes, you, [livejournal.com profile] adais and you, [livejournal.com profile] kyleri. [livejournal.com profile] nickigirl is already there.)

I have two, very different, ideas for this year. One's SF; one's a murder mystery (a sequel of sorts to my 2004 NaNo). I may not decide until November 1. I may try to do both. I have no idea what insanity this November holds, but it's going to be lots of fun.

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